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You recently spent a night in a hotel and had to put up with a great deal of noise very early in the morning because of a faulty central heating system. The manager promised to contact you regarding compensation but you still haven't heard from him. Write a letter to the hotel. In the letter describe the problem at the hotel explain what the manager had said at the time say what you want the manager to do.

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Dear Sir I am writing
this
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 letter regarding that we visit your
hotel
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 on 5 December and there were some problems in
this
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 date. I already told you that you had a serious issue in your
hotel
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especially
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 in room 552 which was regarding the heating system which started early as 4 o’clock in the morning which caused that we did not have a good sleep
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, my son had a sick due to that night.
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, I discussed with
Mr.
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 Ali About solving
this
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 situation and he agreed that we have the right to complain
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 to that, he promised that he will give us fair compensation and he told you will get a luxury suite at any time but, we did not get all these promises. I would like to get a new deal with
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hotel
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 to forget all these suffer I need a cash compensation in the amount 5000$ or I will go to the ministry of tourism to take real measures with your
hotel
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 I look forward to hearing from you very soon

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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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