It has been observed that in many countries not enough students are choosing to study science subjects at university. What do you think are the causes of this problem? What are the solutions to this problem?
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students
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science
subjects
. This
essay will discuss the main causes of disliking sciences subject
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subjects
and also
suggest possible solutions including creating good careers for them in this
field.
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countries
less
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fewer
students
are preferring to study
science
subjects
at tertiary
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the tertiary
level
is that those governments are failed to provide a good future for students
who choose science
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study
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studies
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country's
students
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study
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gives
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science
subject
at university. In Bangladesh, for example
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have little Correct your spelling
possibility
possibiliy
to find a good job in Correct your spelling
possibility
this
field. Bangladeshi governments provide every year a
little amount of money to Add the preposition
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science
sector from their budget. Correct article usage
the science
Therefore
, for this
reason, in many countries
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,countries
third
level
students
are showing less interest to like study
science
related subjects
.
This
problem can be solved by creating a good career and providing facilities for them when studying. Authorities have to plan a big budget for them and will have to create huge employment after completing their study
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science
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university
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the university
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for
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gives
students
during their studying period. Because of this
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,this
science
sector across the world. Correct article usage
the science
Hence
, this
problem can be solved, if the government take effective steps.
In conclusion, it is detrimental for those countries
whose few students
are choosing science
subject
to Fix the agreement mistake
subjects
study
at tertiary
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the tertiary
level
. This
essay discussed some reason
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reasons
this
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solutions including creating employment. The more Wrong verb form
suggesting
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science
in a country, the higher possibility they have to progress.Submitted by ahmedshahriar448 on
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