It has been observed that in many countries not enough students are choosing to study science subjects at university. What do you think are the causes of this problem? What are the solutions to this problem?

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of modern
science
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Scientist
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has enabled
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invent lots of unknown important things which we can not
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imagine
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. But in some
countries
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that their university
students
are presenting disinclination to
study
in
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science
related
subjects
.
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essay will discuss the main causes of disliking sciences
subject
including failing to provide
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future
on
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those
subjects
and
also
suggest possible solutions including creating good careers for them in
this
field.
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the reason why in some particular
countries
less
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students
are preferring to
study
science
subjects
at
tertiary
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the tertiary
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level
is that those governments are failed to provide a good future for
students
who choose
science
to
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the student
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.
Students
seen
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that they
have
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not a
well
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career after completing
study
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studies
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in those
subjects
.
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countries
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country's
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institutions are not encouraging
students
by providing facilities
such
as research, advanced technology and
also
governments are failing to offer
students
a
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good employment with lucratively salaries
as a result
students
are
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to
study
in
science
field which
give
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students
to
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show less interest to choose
science
subject
at university. In Bangladesh,
for example
,
students
have little
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possibility
possibiliy
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possibility
to find a good job in
this
field. Bangladeshi governments provide every year
a
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little amount of money to
science
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the science
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sector from their budget.
Therefore
, for
this
reason, in many
countries
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third
level
students
are showing less interest to like
study
science
related
subjects
.
This
problem can be solved by creating a good career and providing facilities for them when studying. Authorities have to plan a big budget for them and will have to create huge employment after completing their
study
.
In addition
,
administration
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also
have
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to spend huge money for founding all the materials that they
needs
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need
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while studying at
higher
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a higher
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level
.
This
has
help
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to motivate and encourage them to feel that their
countries
offering
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offer
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higher opportunities to them resulting in they will automatically
be
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being
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inspired to choose
science
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a science
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subject
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subjects
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at
university
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the university
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level
to
study
. In USA,
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fir
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instance, their administration
give
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40% of their annual budget to their universities to provide all the facility to their
students
during their studying period. Because of
this
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they are the main leader in
science
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the science
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sector across the world.
Hence
,
this
problem can be solved, if the government take effective steps. In conclusion, it is detrimental for those
countries
whose few
students
are choosing
science
subject
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subjects
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to
study
at
tertiary
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the tertiary
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level
.
This
essay discussed some
reason
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reasons
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for
this
including failing to provide opportunities and
suggest
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suggesting
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solutions including creating employment. The more
students
studying
in
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science
in a country, the higher possibility they have to progress.
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