Despite the increased access to education, a significant number of people cannot read or write. What are the disadvantages and what action should the government take?
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several ways to tackle this
matter by the authority.
On the one hand, inhabitants would have many hurdles in daily
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First
, those are easily deceived by others that want to take advantage of them, especially minority ethnics. Base
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feature, the bad could force the underprivileged to sign some unclear documents which might have the
terrible influence on their later lives. Correct article usage
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Second
, it is quite hard for these people to teach their kids. Children from remote areas have more chance
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actions
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Besides
, they could raise funds to open free classes as well as put this
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priority in certain campaigns. For instance
, there are campaigns like ‘xoa nan mu chu’ in Vietnam. Hence
it can be used to solve the issue.
In conclusion, in spite of the fact that there are more and more residents having exposure to the educational ground, the proportion of citizens that do not have reading and writing abilities is still high. This
leads to certain drawbacks such
as being deceived and barriers in teaching kids. However
, some solutions that the header had better apply are incentivizing and opening classes which are free.Submitted by domaianh.uliser on
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