Despite the increased access to education, a significant number of people cannot read or write. What are the disadvantages and what action should the government take?

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education, an immense number of them do not know how to read or write. The demerits are
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which may affect their life while there are
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lives if they did not have reading or writing skills.
First
, those are easily deceived by others that want to take advantage of them, especially minority ethnics.
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on
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terrible influence on their later lives.
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, it is quite hard for these people to teach their kids. Children from remote areas have more
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to get access to education than parents so adults cannot teach their
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what they have already learnt.
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that the government could take
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varied. The best thing is that the header should give them incentives to study more.
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the
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priority in certain campaigns.
For instance
, there are campaigns like ‘xoa nan mu chu’ in Vietnam.
Hence
it can be used to solve the issue. In conclusion, in spite of the fact that there are more and more residents having exposure to the educational ground, the proportion of citizens that do not have reading and writing abilities is still high.
This
leads to certain drawbacks
such
as being deceived and barriers in teaching kids.
However
, some solutions that the header had better apply are incentivizing and opening classes which are free.
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