Writing task 2 Some people think that school children need to learn practical skills such as car maintenance or bank account management along with their academic subjects at school. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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number of people have the notion that

students

are required to train in practical skills like car repair or bank account management together with their intellectual subjects matter in school.

This

essay shall strongly endorse

this

perception and

thereafter

outline the reason for

this

occurrence after which a meaningful conclusion shall be made.

Firstly

additional knowledge outside their main studies is one of the enormous reasons individuals believe

students

needs

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practical skills.

This

is because, with the turn of events now, most people are heading towards what one can do practically and not theory.

As a result

of

this

, individuals who possess

this

quality are often given the

first

preference before others.

For example

, it has recently been published that,

students

with good grades in accounting and a year

experience

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in any reputable company can apply to Toyota Ghana for immediate employment.

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has

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cause

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qualifications to be employed reducing the unemployment levels. Quite apart from additional knowledge, a source of income

to

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the student is another factor that cannot be underestimated. A key factor to

this

is that

,

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there

students

after completing school will set up their own jobs

in addition

to the one they are doing and by so doing employ people to help.

Consequently

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they have other means of getting money which they can use to supplement other things they need .

For instance

, in an interview with the CEO of Pent television, he has a carpentry workshop with over

15workers

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15 workers

where he

earn

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about 1500 thousand dollars every month.

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he sometimes

use

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to pay some of the workers in the media industry.

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is really supporting him. In

conclusion

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after assessing the reasons

students

need practical skills, I can say without any reservations that, it will be of benefit to the country.