The rising levels of congestion and air pollution found in most of the world citie can be attributed directly to the rapidly increasing number of private cars in use. In order to reverse this decline in quality of life in cities, attempts must be made to encourage people to use their cars less and public transport more. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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, used by private individuals, is

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of the reasons, why

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pollution and congestion swelled dramatically,

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I argue for the need to make public transport and other environmentally friendly transport easier and more comfortable so that

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wouldn't be an essential part of the urban life anymore. It would result both in

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quality of life increase and a better climate situation in general. The main reason why public transport, in my opinion, is crucial, is better and more comfortable cities for residents. To clarify, it means not only

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to breathe but

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more space for people. Let us consider Vienna, Austria's capital, which has

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of the best public transportation systems, and

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is famous for the

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of parks, forests and et cetera. Less

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pollution from

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means a bigger motivation to spend time in the urban areas,

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can find

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not

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hour away from

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's apartment

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but in the

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outskirts.

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, fewer

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are beneficial not only for the

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's residents but for the whole ecosystem and all the living creatures. It may be argued that

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car cannot make a big difference, but car after car,

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after

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, the fight against the climate crisis is vital.

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pollution is not a

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-time problem,

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if the responsibility isn't taken and

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continue to attribute to congestion, the problem is soon to be spread to rural areas as well. I would like to conclude by saying that getting rid of

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in the urban areas is indispensable, were we to sustain the

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quality of our ecosystem as well as to make cities more liveable.