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All children should study a foreign language in school, starting in the earlist grades. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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Studying an international
language
 is increasingly important these days. It is generally thought that learning an international
language
 should be compulsory in a school
thus
, should introduce from grade one itself. In my perspective, I strongly agree with
this
 statement because it clearly helps to improve their confidence level and their ability to explore new areas around the world.
Although
 it has many advantages, some parents feel learning another
language
 is unnecessary because they feel it put immense pressure on children at a period when they should be more concerned about enjoying themselves. Indeed, there have been some recorded instances where children are a lot backwards and find it hard to communicate with one another simply because of grabbing information which could not be handled by the brain. Even if the benefits outweigh the drawbacks, some parents think studying a foreign
language
 is not needed.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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