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Doctors, nurses and teacher make a great contribution to society and should be payed more than entertainment and sport celebrities. Do you agree or disagree?

#doctors #nurses #teacher #contribution #society #entertainment #sport #celebrities
absolutely not. I think it is a complicated job, and
also
 dangerous. As a journalist,
people
 often go to dangerous
places
such
 as war
places
, natural disasters
places
, and crime
places
. One of my friends, named ICharl, has worked for a social media agency, in an advertising apartment. His team produced advertising videos about air conditions. 5) Well, I prefer listening rather than watching. Because of my work, my eyes are always exposed to artificial light, which can lead to numerous negative effects on my eyes. So they need to relax after
a
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work time. 4. I believe that the internet is the most popular source for getting
news
 due to some reasons. According to a recent survey, my
people
 almost possess technical devices
such
 as mobile phones or iPad.
In addition
, Our wireless technology is very modern and stable. 2) No, I have never used it before. There are two reasons behind that.
Firstly
, I am busy.
Secondly
,
news
 on Tiktok is almost inaccurate. 3) Well, a similar rate is true for my
people
. You know. Nowadays there are a lot of convenient ways to get
news
,
such
 as the internet or social media sites. 1) It is strange. In my living area, most
people
 don't watch the
news
 on television.
Instead
 of television, they watch short videos on Youtube
,
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 or read reports on Facebook.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • critical role
  • healthcare professionals
  • societal well-being
  • disparity in income
  • skewed values
  • essential services
  • remuneration
  • mitigate
  • global shortages
  • inherent value
  • nurturing
  • compensation
  • societal contributions
  • profound impact
  • equitable distribution
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