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The plans below show the site of an airport now and how it will look afterredevelopment next year. summarise the information by selecting and reportng the main features, andmake comparisons where relevant

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The maps compare the layout of a southwest airport as it is with a proposed design
next
 year. Overall, there will be considerable development of the airport over the year and it will be transformed from a simple one into a larger
area
 with multiple functions. At the moment, the airport is divided into three parts
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security
passport
control
 and
passport
control
 customs. At the top is the rectangular boarding
area
 with 8 gates scatter around and a walkway for passengers. At the bottom are areas for departures and arrivals with separate entrances. While there is nothing in the arrival
area
, a cafe locates in the
right
 corner of the departure
area
 and a check-in counter facing it. After the redevelopment, the boarding
area
 will be expanded to a "Y" shape to accommodate 10 more gates and the walkway will be converted into a sky train. In the departure
area
, the check-in counter will be relocated to the
right
 and the cafe to the bottom left. Where the check-in counter stands now, a bag drop will be built at the place. As to the arrival
area
, a cafe and an ATM will be added on its
right
 side, and the bottom
right
 corner will be expanded a little for a car hire centre. Both the areas will have extra entrances.
Although
 the security
passport
control
 and
passport
control
 customs will not change, shops will be developed between the security and boarding
area
.
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