You work for a company. You have seen some information online about a training course that would be useful for your work. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter give details of the course say how the course would be useful explain how the company could help you do this course.

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Dear Ali I have recently seen information on google about a very good

course

called ‘HOW TO GET CLIENT”. It is a five-day program starting on 15 April being offered by AL Saleh and Associate Law Firm. I believe

this

course

will benefit

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our company as you know we have

some

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issues in attracting clients

before

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4 years and I thought that program will solve our problems

especially

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that

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since

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a lecturer is a lawyer in a very big firm and they have a crowd of a client.

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, there are a lot of joiner associates in

this

program I can talk with them and discuss

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offering them to work in our company. For these reasons, I am requesting paid leave from 15 to 20 April to attend the

course

and I believe that you will encourage me to have

this

course

. I look forward to hearing from you soon Best Regards

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6 paragraphs

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