You work for a company. You have seen some information online about a training course that would be useful for your work. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter give details of the course say how the course would be useful explain how the company could help you do this course.

Dear Ali I have recently seen information on google about a very good
course
called ‘HOW TO GET CLIENT”. It is a five-day program starting on 15 April being offered by AL Saleh and Associate Law Firm. I believe
this
course
will benefit
to
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our company as you know we have
some
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had some

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issues in attracting clients
before
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for

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4 years and I thought that program will solve our problems
especially
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,especially

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that
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since

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a lecturer is a lawyer in a very big firm and they have a crowd of a client.
However
, there are a lot of joiner associates in
this
program I can talk with them and discuss
about
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offering them to work in our company. For these reasons, I am requesting paid leave from 15 to 20 April to attend the
course
and I believe that you will encourage me to have
this
course
. I look forward to hearing from you soon Best Regards
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