Some people claim that the government should provide free health care. Others think that the government will not provide the most innovative methods of treatment and it's better to invest those funds in education and culture. What is your opinion?

It is often argued that the government should

finance

free

health

care

instead

of spending its budget

in

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education

and

culture

. I believe that the state's investment

health

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in health

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care

is a very important role. I think

education

and

culture

is

also

crucial

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part

of

society

.

This

essay will delve into the upcoming paragraph and

subsequently

will explore perspective in turn. On the one hand, the ministry should definitely allocate a large

part

of its budget

in

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free

health

care

. The economic sector determines the

overall

quality of life, ensuring the basic services,

such

as hospital buildings, doctors and medicines are available to all the citizens irrespective of their income and social status.

Society

needs

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satisfy public services.

Thus

proper funds

are need

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.

For instance

, the absence of medicine in any country will create significant problems. That's why the authority should adequately

finance

health

care

in the first place.

On the other hand

,

education

and

culture

are not a waste of money.

Education

is doing prominent

part

of

society

. Which helps children's mind development

and

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also

culture

is an

intragaral

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integral

part

of

society

.

Culture

helps people's

mind

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minds

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relaxation

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and

amusement

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. I think the government should implement long-term concepts for system change

education

. It is not

a

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logical to neglect

education

and

culture

.

In addition

, we can live without

culture

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cultural

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activities but we

could not

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live without medicine.

Thus

The state must reinforce

strongest

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health

care

system In conclusion, after a thorough analysis

the

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topic, the ministry should allocate a large

part

of

finance

health

care

. I think the government should not neglect and

finance

education

and

culture

. Since they

plays

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vital

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a vital

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part

of

society

.