Some people claim that the government should provide free health care. Others think that the government will not provide the most innovative methods of treatment and it's better to invest those funds in education and culture. What is your opinion?

It is often argued that the government should

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free

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instead

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of spending its budget

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education

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and

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. I believe that the state's investment

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care

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is a very important role. I think

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and

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is

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of

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essay will delve into the upcoming paragraph and

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will explore perspective in turn. On the one hand, the ministry should definitely allocate a large

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of its budget

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free

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. The economic sector determines the

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quality of life, ensuring the basic services,

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as hospital buildings, doctors and medicines are available to all the citizens irrespective of their income and social status.

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needs

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satisfy public services.

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proper funds

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.

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, the absence of medicine in any country will create significant problems. That's why the authority should adequately

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in the first place.

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,

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and

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are not a waste of money.

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is doing prominent

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of

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. Which helps children's mind development

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also

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culture

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is an

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integral

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of

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helps people's

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. I think the government should implement long-term concepts for system change

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. It is not

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logical to neglect

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and

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.

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, we can live without

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culture

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activities but we

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live without medicine.

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The state must reinforce

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system In conclusion, after a thorough analysis

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topic, the ministry should allocate a large

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of

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. I think the government should not neglect and

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education

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and

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. Since they

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vital

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part

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of

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.