You and some friends ate a meal at a restaurant to celebrate a special occasion, and you were very pleased with the food and service. Write a letter to the restaurant manager. In your letter: - give details of your visit to the restaurant - explain the reason for the celebration - say what was good about the food and the service

Dear Mr Manager, I am writing to commend the excellent food and service of The Majestic.
Last
week, I, together with my friends, dined at your restaurant in Grade street to celebrate an impromptu bachelorette party. It was the
first
time for all of us to eat at your restaurant, and we were surprised by how the food was very delicious and exceptional, especially the lobster and the shrimp cocktails. The beef stir fry was
also
very popular among the group.
Moreover
, the service was top-notch. We were a party of 15, and I was pleased that your restaurant was able to serve us with ease. The staff, led by our server, Mr Bill, was able to comply with our on-the-spot requests with a smile.
Also
, even though we did not have a reservation, we were still welcomed warmly. I would definitely recommend your establishment to my family and friends. Please feel free to add my endorsement to any promotional materials you may have in the future. Yours sincerely, Jade Smith
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