Last month you had a holiday overseas where you stayed with some friends. They have just sent you some photos of your holiday. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter ● thank them for the photos and for the holiday ● explain why you didn’t write earlier ● invite them to come and stay with you

Hello friends, I hope
this
letter finds you in radiant health and high in spirit. I have recently received an envelope full of pictures from our holiday to your county.
Firstly
, I would like to appreciate you guys for the amazing pictures we had during the journey.
Additionally
, it was one of the best trips I ever had in my life, as it was a new country for me I learn a lot more because of companions like you. The best moment I cannot forget is when we had a wonderful ride on a toboggan. Apart from it, I would
also
like to apologise to you for not giving a revert to your emails. The moment I came back, I had a lot of pendency at my workplace because I took a week off from it.
In addition
to it, my manager wanted the reports as soon as possible.
Furthermore
, I request you to visit my country as from now it is a great time to spend here. It is said that after the month of August is known as a festival season for India and it would
also
be a great moment to visit as well as, we can spend a whale of a time Yours lovingly,
Vandan
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Vanden

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