you have just read an article in a national newspaper which claims that town centers in your country all look very similar to each other. you don't fully agree with this opinion. say which points in the article you agree with explain ways in which your town center is different from most other town centers offer to give guided tour of your twon to the writer of the article

Dear Sir, I am writing to you with regard to the article published in the National newspaper, which claims that all the town centres of India are indistinguishable.
To begin
with, I would like to express my agreement on statements related to the infrastructure and ideology adapted. Indeed we can see the familiarity in the framework and ideas adapted in the construction of these in all the cities.
For example
, we can see the uniformity in the building structure, as well as in the colour schemes.
However
, I disagree with your claim that all these buildings are complete replicas of each other. Here, I would like to throw some light on the centre of my city which has variations from the others. With respect to the
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facilities it has.
for instance
, it has been built in the mall as well as near to the public transport facilities. In view of the above, I would like to give you a tour of my town so that you can have a practical experience. Look forward to have your reply. Yours faithfully, Komal Handa
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