Under British and Australian laws a jury in a criminal case has no access to information about the defendant's past criminal record. This protects the person who is being accused of the crime. Some lawyers have suggested that this practice should be changed and that a jury should be given all the past facts before they reach their decision about the case. Do you agree or disagree?

Around the world exist many justice systems in a criminal
case
, while the judge takes the final decision, like the British and Australian structure, including a
jury
into its structure, which has the obligation to analyse proofs, arguments and declarations to determine a
person
’s guilty or not.
This
organization have some rules, between them and maybe one of the most questionable is that individuals that act as the
jury
have no Access to related defendant’s criminal record. Some people consider it a mistake
however
I completely agree with
this
rule
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because it is a form to get a fair process and not make decisions about past acts. Nowadays, is easier to find information about any
person
on the Web than before, but when you are participating as a
jury
in a legal process you must avoid research about that
person
that will be processed to warranty him a fair judgment. When you read something related to some
person
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social networks, you could create biased
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against
againts
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against
him.
This
behaviour could affect your results as
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because you are
no
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able to be unbiased about the criminal
case
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thoughts
thoughs
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thoughts
will be supported in your readings and not in the proofs that lawyers can show in the process.
Furthermore
,
although
there
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a lot of information available on
Internet
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, much of them are
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fake news. As result, you can sentence a
person
to jail base
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wrong information.
On the other hand
, a
person
's acts are not determined by his past.
However
, a few groups of people discriminate against others simply for had been stay in a prison,
although
never mind the reason,
this
is a mark that an individual must carry on his shoulders while
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tries to introduce himself in society. Even worst, is the
case
when there is a suspect of repeat criminal behaviour. As
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, justice system elements, which we can find the
jury
could find guilty
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even without knowing the evidence, only the past facts. In conclusion, I think that any
person
that is
called to participate as a
jury
in a criminal
case
should not have access to any material or document about the past criminal record in a pro to warranty a fair defence even when the
person
is guilty.
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