As transportation and housing problems increase in many cities, some governments are encouraging businesses to move to rural areas. Do you think the benefits outweigh the disadvantages?

城乡转移 商业中心转移能带动偏远地区的发展 人口流动给偏远地区带来了新的活力 促进新的工作岗位 不过这取决于每个国家的不同之处 若有条件是好事 若没有条件则不如集中精力搞基础建设 As traffic and accommodation pressure have rocketed by leaps and bounds

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recent years ,the rural-to-urban

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has been a crucial topic to discuss nowadays .Many opine that

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the economic

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from civic

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to urban regions can decrease

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pressure and

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encourage more commercial chances .From my own perspective ,

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the traffic and housing pressure

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but bring more opportunities to the rural

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are as followed.

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of all ,it is undeniable that today's world has become over-populated ,especially

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urban

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highly-developed

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usually shoulder much responsibility ,making every effort to keep themself staying in the city ,paying back their house

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and bearing the traffic congestion

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.

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if there is any promising condition

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as the same occupation in rural

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,people may have more energy to work hard and live their life positively .And

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why I approve the proposal of the

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as mentioned.

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there

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larger

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to live in the rural

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,with the potential infrastructure to be built ,more and more job

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can be provided .

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the

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of commercial businesses can bring more chances to the rural

areas

.Under

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circumstance ,the economically deprived

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of rural

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can be revoluted .

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,it is difficult to say what will really happen after the

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the lack of

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such

as health

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and basic

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in the rural

areas

.Those are

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in the cities ,but a challenge to be tackled in the rural spaces .But there exists

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solution

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it ,with everyone's effort. In conclusion ,when

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analyzing

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analysing

this

topic ,I do believe the pros of

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overweights the cons.