Some people think that it is important to use leisure time for activities that improve the mind such as reading and solving puzzles. Others feel that it is important to rest the mind during leisure time discuss both the views and give your opinion.

The proper way to spend

leisure

time

is a topic of interesting debate among different sections of

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society. Some

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that

leisure

activity should refresh and rejuvenate the

mind

,

while

others affirm that the

mind

should be given

rest

in

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and spirit during free

time

.

This

essay examines both the perspective and arrives at a definitive point of

view

. A sizeable number of people in

the

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society are of the

view

that it is necessary to give the

mind

complete

rest

for some

time

after a day’s hectic schedule of

work

. The reason they cite in

this

regard is

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that engaging

in certain hobbies may keep the

mind

strained , and it can no longer be considered as

rest

.

For example

, reading a book or doing a puzzle will involve the functioning of

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and brain, which means they are at

work

.

As a result

,

leisure

time

may just turn out to be another occasion for

work

, which involves increased stress

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and fatigue.

Hence

this

view

holds that the

mind

requires complete

rest

after a long stretch of

work

.

On the other hand

,many others believe that they can spend their free

time

more meaningfully and profitably by reading or answering puzzles.Obliviously , the former gives the reader pleasure, and information on various subjects,

while

the latter can keep people, the young and the elderly alike, engaged and energize the

mind

.

For instance

, many newspaper readers solve crosswords and

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to keep themselves happily engaged in their spare

time

.

Consequently

, reading or trying world puzzles can be recommended to anybody to

while

away their hours of

rest

.

Therefore

, those who advocate

this

view

maintain that

leisure

time

should

also

be used to

once

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advantage In conclusion,

although

there

contrary

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views on how to take

rest

, I would argue that it is

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sensible to spend

such

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time

more positively with interesting books or world

puzzle

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puzzles

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. Undoubtedly,

this

will refresh the

mind

and fill it with positive energy.