The two pie charts below show some employment patterns in Great Britain in 1992. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The charts provide information on the proportion of males and females in
employment
in 6 broad categories, divided into manual and non-manual Use synonyms
occupations
. In general, a greater Use synonyms
percentage
of Use synonyms
women
Use synonyms
work
in non-manual Use synonyms
occupations
than Use synonyms
work
in manual Use synonyms
occupations
, and the reverse is true for Use synonyms
men
.
In the non-manual Use synonyms
occupations
, Use synonyms
while
a greater Linking Words
percentage
of working Use synonyms
women
than Use synonyms
men
are found in clerical-type positions, there is a smaller Use synonyms
percentage
of Use synonyms
women
than Use synonyms
men
employed in managerial and professional positions. The Use synonyms
percentage
of Use synonyms
women
employed in other non-manual Use synonyms
occupations
is slightly larger than the Use synonyms
percentage
of Use synonyms
men
in these Use synonyms
occupations
.
In manual Use synonyms
employment
, the biggest difference between the two sexes is in the Use synonyms
employment
of craft workers, where males make up 24% of the workforce and females just 3%. Use synonyms
Furthermore
, the Linking Words
percentage
of Use synonyms
women
working as general Use synonyms
working as general
labourers is very small, only 1%. There is not a great deal of difference between the Remove the redundancy
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percentage
of Use synonyms
men
doing other forms of manual Use synonyms
work
(26%) and Use synonyms
women
in other manual Use synonyms
work
(27%).
In summary, the two charts clearly show that Use synonyms
women
do not have the same access as Use synonyms
men
to certain types of Use synonyms
employment
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