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you have just read an article in a national newspaper which claims that town centers in your country all look very similar to each other. you don't fully agree with this opinion. say which points in the article you agree with. explain ways in which your town center is different from most other town centers. offer to give guided tour of your twon to the writer of the article

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Dear Sir, I am writing to express my disagreement with the article published which claimed that all the town centres of India are indistinguishable.
To begin
 with, I refer to the statements that all the metropolis centres were built by considering similar ideas, as well as frameworks in mind, and I agree with that.
For example
, uniformity in the building structure and colour schemes.
In addition
, all these complexes are having shopping malls, and food joints and are well connected to public transport.
However
, we can see the massive difference in some of these buildings as well. Let me tell you about the one in my city, which is different because of its architectural design
moreover
, it has advanced amenities
such
 as recreational centres, museums, health and sports clubs other than the traditional facilities. In view of the above, I believe you should give a visit once.
Therefore
, I would like to invite you to give you a guided tour by myself. Look forward to have your reply. Yours faithfully, Komal Handa
Submitted by komalhanda1990 on

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