Advertisements play a significant key role for the people. Few companies are like to sponsor sportsmen to attract the people. Many people think it is a great thing to do. However, other people opine that it brings myriad disadvantages. This essay intends to discuss both views and give opinion.

Advertisements play a significant key role for the
people
. Few companies
are
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like to sponsor sportsmen to attract
the
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people
. Many
people
think it is a great thing to do.
However
, other
people
opine that it brings myriad disadvantages.
This
essay intends to discuss both views and give an opinion.
To begin
with, it is a positive thing to
higher
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sports person for the
advertisement
. Because many
people
are easily get
influced
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influenced
to buy
product
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the product
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. Many sportsmen are role models for societies.
For instance
, Sachin Tendulkar
was participated
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in the
advertisement
of
covid
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19 vaccine.
As a result
, numerous
people
easily
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convinced to
took
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vaccines. Apart from that, it
also
helps to increase the economy of the countries.
Advertisement
can create multiple jobs for
the
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educated
people
as well as manual workers. Multiple companies and employees earn money.
On the other hand
, some sports man taking disadvantage of their name and fame. They are doing an
advertisement
of the harmful product for Money. They are
focus
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to earn money
instead
of the health of
people
. Recently,
ciggaretes
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cigarettes
cigarette
advertising
was did
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by Virat Kohli.
Consequently
, all young
people
are impress
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to
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him and
trying
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to do smoking.
Last
but not least, sometimes many children are
also
attracted to
buy
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unusual things. Because the
advertisement
was shown by their
favorite
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sportsman. After that, They put pressure on their parents to buy it.
therefore
, sometimes
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impacts occur on
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the child
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child
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. To conclude, it is
good
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thing if
the
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sportsman uses their popularity in a good way. It helps to give knowledge and information about rarities of product.
Also
, it enhances the awareness among the local communities. While there are some demerits of
this
if they use their name by doing wrong
advertisement
.
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