You work at home and have a problem with a piece of equipment that you use for your job. Write a letter to the shop or company which supplied the equipment. In your letter • describe the problem with the equipment explain how this problem is affecting your work • say what you want the shop or company to do

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing

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letter regarding an issue which I have with the

camera

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that has your company brand on it and makes a disturbance in my daily work plan as I am a journal photographer. Let me explain more about the matter.

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, I bought

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camera

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6 months ago with a two-year guarantee from the central branch which is located in a Hyper chain store. Some of the photos that I have taken recently have not been so clear and the contrast of them has been decreasing over the

last

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two weeks.

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this

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problem contribute to the rejection of my submitted reports to the magazine and none of my photographs has been published recently.

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, seeing that

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camera

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is a vital part of my job

consequently

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, I contacted you to provide me with a solution to fix the

camera

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or replace it with a new one if the guarantee it covers. I look forward to hearing from you. Thanks and regards, Amirali.

saeedforoghi538Wed Aug 03 2022

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

6 paragraphs

170 words

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