There are some information about sales of Fairtrade-*labelled coffee and bananas in 1999 and 2004 in five European countries.

This
table shows that the number of
sales
of Fairtrade-labelled coffee and bananas changed a lot from 1999 to 2001 in 5 Europe developed countries. It is clear that the
UK
gradually dominated the
sales
of both.Whereas for others,the
sales
of coffee all experienced an increase in a varying range.But some countries dropped
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the banana field. In the beginning,the market for coffee
sales
was very small.The five countries,the
UK
,Switzerland,Denmark,Belgium and Sweden have 1.5,3,1.8,1 and 0.8 million euros respectively in 1999.After 5 years,the
sales
in the
UK
increased almost 13 times,to 20 million ,which is dramatic.In comparison,the minimum increase in Sweden with only 0.2 million. When it comes to bananas, the
UK
still grow rapidly from 15 to 47 in the 5 years.Switzerland and Denmark
also
went up about 6 times in the
sales
of bananas.While for the Belgium and Sweden.They decreased a little,from 1.8 to 1 and 2 to 0.9 respectively.
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