Do you agree that education will change a criminal?

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is one of the most for

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, most

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provide free

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for children until they finish their secondary

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encourage

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. But, will

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change a criminal? In my opinion, I totally agree with

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statement.

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, what

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learned in

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is not just only the knowledge from the books, teachers

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also

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teach students how to

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great

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and how you can help the

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society

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we need to

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is we need to do the right things and try not to enter the wrong

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, some poor countries

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as

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Africa

have no

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resources

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rescourses

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resources

to let their

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have free

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and they are no money to study as well. Compare to those countries, more and more

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took place on the street or on the road which has

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everywhere.

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,

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from other places might scare to visit there.

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, some

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think that

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will not change a criminal because

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such

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they have a lot of famous

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in the world but still occurred

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about guns

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crime in

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as they can actually buy a gun in

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, there must have more

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if they had

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to

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. As we learned how to

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right or wrong, so most

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people

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are not

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to see these happen and trying to stop that

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the legal way. In conclusion, I agree that

education

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will change

criminal

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criminals

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.

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, it will become a severe problem in the world.