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Do you agree that education will change a criminal?

#education #change
Education
 is one of the most for
human
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being
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, most
of
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countries
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the countries
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 provide free
education
 for children until they finish their secondary
school
for
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to
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encourage
encurage
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encourage
people
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people's
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 acquisition
knowledge
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. But, will
education
 change a criminal? In my opinion, I totally agree with
this
 statement.
First
, what
people
 learned in
school
 is not just only the knowledge from the books, teachers
are
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also
 teach students how to
being
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a
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great
people
 and how you can help the
socirity
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society
security
. One of the majority
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thing
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things
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 we need to
learned
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 is we need to do the right things and try not to enter the wrong
path way
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pathway
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.
In contrast
, some poor countries
such
 as
Affica
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Africa
 have no
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resources
recourses
rescourses
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resources
 to let their
people
 have free
education
 and they are no money to study as well. Compare to those countries, more and more
criminal
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criminals
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 took place on the street or on the road which has
thief
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thieves
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 everywhere.
Therefore
,
people
 from other places might scare to visit there.
On the other hand
, some
people
 think that
education
 will not change a criminal because
such
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as
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in
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US
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the US
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 they have a lot of famous
university
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universities
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 in the world but still occurred
criminal
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criminals
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.
For example
, we can
also
heard
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about guns
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guns
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gun
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 crime in
school
 as they can actually buy a gun in
gun
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the gun
a gun
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shop
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shops
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.
However
, there must have more
crime
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crimes
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 if they had
not
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get
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 to
school
. As we learned how to
juge
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judge
 right or wrong, so most
of
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the
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people
 are not
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 to see these happen and trying to stop that
thought
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through
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 the legal way. In conclusion, I agree that
education
 will change
criminal
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criminals
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.
Otherwise
, it will become a severe problem in the world.
Submitted by kyle.kakili on

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