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Team activities can teach more skills to individual more than other activities ideally. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

#team #activities #skills
More and more people claim that
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have
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 given more ability to
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more
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than individual activity. Even though some individuals do not support the idea, I mostly believed
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that the
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 of cooperative action has been a great influence in someone’s
lives
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 no matter in past or in
modern
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 world. Admittedly, team projects can be inefficient somehow in a situation. The
first
 reason why is that there is no equal division
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 the group members
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 since it can result to create
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 environment among the co-workers. The case in point would have been
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 of activities is not respectful in the group,
such
 as a person who
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 more effort than other members of
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.
On the other hand
, working
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makes
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individual
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 more motivated and creative in that aspect. Prior to all
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thigs
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, in order to be able to focus deeply, people should need to have other person’s thoughts. Thanks to the mates that encourages peoples with sharing their own experience.
In addition
 to
this
, the most crucial thing is brainstorming which
peoples
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 have discussed
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the topic and found the optimal response to it.
Therefore
, it can
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into
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succession
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 of the employees and as well as employers. If we can look at the works which
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 made by
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 individuals, we can clearly observe some diverse range of opinions which is finished with excellent support.
Besides
, it is not a humdrum
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 since it created a quite satisfying position most of the
times
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. The most interesting topic is the funniest time spending influence. To sum up, movement of the co-operating actions gives more opportunities to get a good place in life. I am of opinion that, group activities ought to be more popular in our globalized world.
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