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Some people prefer to be nocturnal during exam days and go through the entire syllabus in the last few days, whereas others have regular habits, studying a little every day. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of both studying patterns and choose which one is a better way of action according to you

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Nowadays certain
people
 prefer
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to
 be nocturnal during exam
days
 and go through the entire curriculum in the
last
 few
days
. whereas others have regular habits, studying a little every day.
This
 essay will compare both of them and discuss profits and drawbacks. On the Fİrst hand Studying a little
everyday
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every day
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 had benefits
such
 as Increase discipline and doing on
time
.
İ
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I
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 believe studying a little
everyday
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 is very organised and disciplined . Discipline is crucial for life. According to BBC news, Discipline 40% improves
people
's life quality.
Such
 as easily skipping class . The other pros are doing it on
time
.
People
 always take homework or project and they should deliver
it
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them
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 on
time
. An extensive survey conducted by CNBC news revealed that students who deliver projects
on
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appropriate
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time
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feel confident. Confidence
people
 compare to other
people
 easily overcome their issues.
On the other hand
, studying the
last
 few
days
 has got a lot of drawbacks
such
 as being under pressure and anxiety. Being under pressure is fall efficiency. According to Euronews every 10 out of 8 students studying the
last
 few
days
 feel under pressure and become indecisive.
This
 student's school life is getting worse. The
second
 disadvantage is being worried. Being worried is always an issue for
people
. According to research , 70%
percent
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 of
people
 are worried because of studying for the
last
 few
days
. İt affect their brain function.
Moreover
,
people
's bodies get slower. İn
conclusion
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 there are many pros and cons of studying the
last
 few
days
 and studying a little every day.
IT
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It
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 has been suggested that Studying
on
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at
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proper
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the proper
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time
 is very beneficial. It
improve
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improves
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 lots of things
such
 as mood , brain function and efficiency.
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