Human activity has had a negative impact on planet and animals around world. Some people think that this cannot be changed. While others believe actions can be taken to bring about a change. Discuss both and give your opinion.
In recent times, human exploitation of The authority should implement long-term plans and laws for these destructive issues. The next step in combating biodiversity loss is informing the general population about the danger of
activities
have been impacting the world. There are many factors. Which contributes to this
problem. Moreover
,these factors do not only cause biodiversity extinction but it creates other issues. folk say that the global impact cannot be changed. While
others believe actions can change the impact of the world. This
essay will delve into the upcoming paragraph and subsequently
will explore perspective in turn. The two main causes of species extinction are changes in their habitats and over-exploitation of natural resources
. When humans artificially transform the environment. They destroy vegetation and animal
natural habitats. Fix the agreement mistake
animals
For instance
, to build new roads folk are cutting down trees, cementing the soil and altering the atmosphere. In addition
, when the activities
connected with capturing and harvesting natural resources
are too intense in a particular area. The resources
become exhausted. For example
, too frequent fishing doesn't leave enough time for to fish reproduce and makes them disappear. Firstly
, Some possible solutions to this
problem are protecting natural areas and promoting awareness among people. By protecting, areas where human activities
limited
and Add a missing verb
are limited
avoid
Wrong verb form
avoiding
Correct article usage
the
its
natural Correct pronoun usage
apply
resources
. We can save the
untouched wildlife and prevent species from dying out. Correct article usage
apply
Moreover
Add a comma
,
this
problem. This
way, society will be more conscious of the environment and won't overuse or destroy its resources
. In Conclusion, after a thorough analysis of the topic, human activities
that change the atmosphere have a negative impact on the ecosystem. Hence
folk should unite to tackle these obstacles. If they continue, it would put an end to our life existence.Submitted by Sasha on
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Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
The easiest way to score well on the IELTS Task 2 writing portion is to structure your writing in a solid essay format.
A strong argument essay structure can be split up into 4 paragraphs, each containing 4 sentences (except the conclusion paragraph, which only contains 3 sentences).
Stick to this essay structure:
- Paragraph 1 - Introduction
- Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
- Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
- Paragraph 4 - Conclusion