In the past, when students did a university degree, they tended to study in their own country. Nowadays, they have more opportunity to study aborad. Do the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantage?

Higher education is of great significance for individuals’ future. In the old days, the majorly of teenagers preferred to get
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undergraduate degree in their homeland.
However
, there are
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opportunities for youngsters to graduate from
universitates
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universities
abroad
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these days. In my opinion, the pros of
this
situation
are outweigh
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the cons, and
this
essay will explain why so.
Although
study
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abroad
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disadvantages, the advantages
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which
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far more obvious. On the one hand, opponents of
study
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oversea always argue that it will cause them to lack money and
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lose
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interpersonal relationship.
Firstly
, the tuition fees, travel expenses, rents, transportation fees, books and supplies, and the overall cost of living can add up quickly when getting a degree in other countries.
Loan
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may be required in order to pay those bills, and after graduation, graduates need to spend years
to pay
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off debt under large pressure.
Secondly
, due to the long distance, students will be far away from their families and friends - they cannot see each other every single day as before. As a consequence, their relationships will highly likely
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be estranged,
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the support and affection given by close people in their home country. Whereas, I believe the benefits are outweighed by the drawbacks.
On the other hand
, living in a different country alone,
this
experience can help teenagers to gain independence and broaden their horizons.
To begin
with, undergraduates are possibly
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experiencing certain levels of independence for the very
first
time. They need to solve problems by themselves
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because they cannot rely on their parents anymore.
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, they will learn
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skills after dealing with a variety of living tasks and challenges.
Besides
, plenty
studies
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have shown that most
of
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the
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successful entrepreneurs have studied abroad.
By exploring
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different
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the different
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world
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worlds
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and different
culture
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cultures
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can broaden
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horizon
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. Get inspired by foreign knowledge and education,
learning
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who
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they are,
knowing
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what they want to do, and
identifying
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what they can do in
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future career. In conclusion, it seems to me that self-independence and
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perspective have a more positive long-term influence on lives than the thought of negative aspects,
for example
, financial problems and
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long distance
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connections.
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