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People should follow the local customs and traditions, when they come to live in a new country. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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 contemporary epoch, whilst opponents hold the belief that immigrants should not lose their cultural identity while living among other nations, proponents have a diverse perspective. I believe that they should integrate with their foreign peers to be aware of other cultures. To embark on, living with other nations demands
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flexibility
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flexibility
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 attitude.
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, some advocates are convinced that living abroad is a good chance to expand their horizons and
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boost their ability to understand others who have different mindsets .
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immigrants
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immigrants
 who have left their motherlands ,and lived in other developed
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 like Germany .
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, what can be said is that gaining more experiences through integrating with different individuals who have
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different
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different
 thoughts not only will influence us positively , but
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 keep us updated with different traditions around the world.
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, some students ,who have abandoned their homelands to study in affluent
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United Kingdom, should be taught about their target
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' heritage and languages. To illustrate, that will raise their academic performance and facilitate their social and educational lives.
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, they will attain thriving jobs with lucrative salaries in the future.
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, many rich
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 have offered scholarships to those who are capable of learning and dealing with others .
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, cultural diversity is crucial to
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 the gap between different
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. In
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 after
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 essay has manifested the points mentioned above, it can be reiterated that it is paramount to have multi-cultural societies in
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 modernized world ,and
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 can be achieved by keeping updated with other nations' heritage.
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