Many people are afraid to leave their home because of their fear of crime. Some people believe that more action should be taken to prevent crime, but others feel that little can be dome. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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recent year,

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are several individuals

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who feel

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unsafe when they go outside their house because they

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to

fear

related to wrongdoing which

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the security and stability of

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whether the

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crime rate will

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or not. In my viewpoint, I will discuss both

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of

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paragraphs

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safe outside their homes.

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and foremost, the

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government

goverment

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government

can prevent

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violation by set

the

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legal laws related to

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their people who

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a

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bad behaviour.

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, those who commit

felony

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felonies

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like murder,

they

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should be received strict punishment via

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imprisonment

life

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for life

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or death

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penalty

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the strict punishment to deterrent to

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who

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lawbreaks

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lawbreakers

law breaks

or illegal plans.

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, there are

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cases

such

as offenders after

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competing

completing

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penalty

, they cope with the serious problems that they cannot go back the

society

because of

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losing

lossing

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losing

jobs.

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, the authority should create

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decent

job

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when they go back the

society

to ensure they do not commit a crime again.

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argue

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that

reality

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actions cannot involve these

fear

of people.

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with, there are several individuals starting their

fear

of crime because they

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by

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mind

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of

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perpetuated by the media.

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networking

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networking

sites nowadays,

it

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tends to constantly give

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information related to the

lawlesness

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lawlessness

lawless

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, it

difficult

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to tackle

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belief

belife

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belief

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cannot

earily

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easily

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such

as

growing

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income gap between the rich and poor

in to

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capitalist societies to cope. In conclusion, there are various individuals still feeling

fear

of wrongdoing and growing prison rates in

society

that make impair the uncomfort and safe

for

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everyone and

society

. But I

beleive

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believe

that can be

sloved

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solved

by these actions

such

as strict punishment with those who commit

felony

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a felony

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