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some people with a good education and experience in their field decide to move abroad to work. Why do you think that is? What are the problems caused by this?

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Nowadays settling in other
countries
 becoming increasingly popular. The majority of
people
 with good education
qualification
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qualifications
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 and relevant experience are preferring to work overseas.
This
 essay will discuss the main reasons and side effects of working abroad. Perhaps the main reason behind many
people
 tend to function from overseas is because of the greater pay. As their home
countries
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countries'
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 pay grade is less
when
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 compared with other
countries
, so many
people
 are choosing to work abroad . According to
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survey
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a survery
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survery
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survey
 conducted by Fobes magazine more than 65%
Indians
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of Indians
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 are moving to
countries
 like Australia, America, Canada, UK etc, because of higher salaries.
Beside
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this
, another key reason is
lack
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the lack
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 of enough job options.
This
 means in many
countries
people
 are unable to find
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jobs relevant to their background education because of the increase in population. Moving to other
countries
 has
it's
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 own
disadvantage
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disadvantages
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. The most common problem many
people
 encounter is missing their family members and friends. As they will be busy in their life and can't find time to talk
their
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 families and well-wishers,
as a
result
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 they will develop a distance among them.
Furthermore
, it has
greater
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a greater
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 impact on
health
. Some
people
 might
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feel
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fell
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feel
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 sick as their
body
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bodies
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 won't support
because
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them because
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 of
of
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new living and climatic conditions.
For instance
, A Canadian newspaper published a story on how many Indian
people
 faced
health
 issues because of Canada's
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extreme
extream
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extreme
 cold weather conditions. In conclusion,
Although
 moving to states has
benifits
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benefits
 like high pay grade and good
employement
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employment
oppurtunities
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opportunities
,
people
also
 face some
of
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the problems like missing their family and risk their
health
. In my opinion, as
health
 is the real wealth
people
 should consider their
health
 as
priority
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a priority
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 before moving
to
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apply
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overseas.
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