Governments should spend money on railways rather than roads. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

It is perhaps the long-disturbing traffic issue that drives governments all over the globe to make great efforts in establishing or improving their traffic

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, I still cannot be enrolled in the camp that claims it is wise to construct

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railway

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rather than roads. Undoubtedly, the

railway

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construction, in a way, can be deemed as a win-win program for both the country and its citizens. After all, compared with other types of transportation, the transporting load of

railage

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railing

in a unit time is the largest and it is

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the fastest approach on land. Simultaneously, due to its strikingly strong operating

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in running, it can scarcely entail any congestion. Evidently, it is advantageous to implement the plan referred to

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railway

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establishment. Rather, whether it is the rail or the road, the erection is in requirement of many other comprehensive elements,

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example

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the scale of city development, the extent of population mobility, the condition of geographical surroundings and so forth. For

those world-famous metropolitan

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, like New York or Shanghai, both railroad and traffic-way are key

in

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the

city

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function. For one thing, major cities need to receive populations nationwide and even worldwide; thereby, sufficient convenience must be provided by

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train

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. Meanwhile, residents living in

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a big city are supposed to be

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with

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a relatively pleasant road-travel

condition

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, for those middle-sized cities or towns，situations should differ according to different complex

consideration

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. With the help of proper geography and adequate budgets, building

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railway

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should not be

a

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malfeasance.

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, do forget that along with the above sweeteners, rail service signifies a higher financial investment, a larger amount of resources as well as a much more complicated running

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, all of which require a considerable number of time and budget.

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, during the construction process, more severe traffic congestion is inevitable, unless the authorities can avoid these visible or potential issues

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a blind construction of

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railway

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cannot be a wise choice.