Some experts believe that it is better for children to begin learning a foreign language at primary schools rather than secondary school. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

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It is common in many countries to teach a secondary
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at a primary school and many parents start raising bilingual children in some modern families.
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, which many parents
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. Learning a new
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at early
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has scientifically proven advantages of improving
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child's
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brain
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misbelief is just a conjecture with no valid claims. Introducing a
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during the developing stage of a
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had many prominent advantages physically and mentally. The skill to catch words and
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them is an inherent ability in an infant's
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and
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it is more straightforward for a
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to learn a new
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an adult while the
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is not functioning efficiently. Many scientists
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claim that a
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who has learnt bilingually at his primary school is likely to have more creativity and
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skills.
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, in a bilingually raised household, the children tend to have chances to learn different cultures and
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they become more
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than others. Having said these scientific findings, many elders in most families hold a superstition that teaching
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a
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language
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will ruin the national
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and make the
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more confused.
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misbelief is strong in some countries, there is no valid reason for that. Despite
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some parents think those bilingual kids will struggle while communicating with other peers, it is found
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that those kids have
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probability of being leaders or top students in many primary schools and kindergartens. To conclude, teaching more than a mother
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can
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positive effects on the
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's
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by improving cognitive skills, whereas the only drawback that some people claim is only misunderstanding the science.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Cognitive development
  • Enhance
  • Problem-solving skills
  • Pronunciation
  • Mimic
  • Native-like accent
  • Cultural awareness
  • Sensitivity
  • Exposure
  • Resource allocation
  • Qualified
  • Effective instruction
  • Overwhelmed
  • Curriculum
  • Undermining
  • Mother tongue
  • Prioritizing
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