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You've been asked to do a presentation and will need help setting up the equipment for it. Write a letter to your colleague. In your letter let him/her know when and where the presentation will take place tell him/her what equipment you will need explain how he/she can help you.

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Dear Mr John, I am writing to request your help to set up the audio
speaker
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 device in our
office
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 main hall for tomorrow’s meeting. As you are aware, there is a family gathering event which is happening at our
office
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. There would be a huge crowd and our management decided to arrange the event in the
office
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 main hall. We need to arrange a
speaker
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 and fix it in the main hall. Our management people intended to deliver short notes to the audience which is majorly on
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 environment and family responsibility. They told me to set up the
speaker
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 and do the quality checking to avoid any disturbance while delivering a speech. I received a sound
speaker
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 from the
office
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 boy.
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, I am not aware of fixing the
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 as well as performing
audio
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 check. I request you to stay back in the
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 after working hours. I am looking forward to working with you. Yours Sincerely, Ann
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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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