You've been asked to do a presentation and will need help setting up the equipment for it. Write a letter to your colleague. In your letter let him/her know when and where the presentation will take place tell him/her what equipment you will need explain how he/she can help you.

Dear Mr John, I am writing to request your help to set up the audio
speaker
device in our
office
main hall for tomorrow’s meeting. As you are aware, there is a family gathering event which is happening at our
office
. There would be a huge crowd and our management decided to arrange the event in the
office
main hall. We need to arrange a
speaker
and fix it in the main hall. Our management people intended to deliver short notes to the audience which is majorly on
social
Add an article
the social

The noun phrase social environment seems to be missing a determiner before it. Consider adding an article.

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environment and family responsibility. They told me to set up the
speaker
and do the quality checking to avoid any disturbance while delivering a speech. I received a sound
speaker
from the
office
boy.
However
, I am not aware of fixing the
speaker
as well as performing
audio
Correct article usage
an audio

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check. I request you to stay back in the
office
after working hours. I am looking forward to working with you. Yours Sincerely, Ann
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