You use the local swimming pool often and during one of your visits you encountered a problem. Write a letter to the manager and say

Dear Sir, I am writing
this
letter to express my dissatisfaction
on
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using a swimming
pool
as I am
regular
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a regular

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visitor
in
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to

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your
water
pool
.
Firstly
, I am Rohit and I had enrolled
your
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swimming
pool
for learning. The issue has occurred in the afternoon of
day
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the day

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before yesterday
which
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when

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was
water
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the water

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pool
saw uncleaned and found fungus on the
water
area.
In addition
to that, there some other problem which
water
had smelling owing to that some people left from
pool
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the pool
a pool

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.
However
, I did
compliant
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to
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the employee but he ignored and nothing was changed. He went inside and
not
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did not

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done any action for changing
water
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the water

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and
cleaning
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clean

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tank
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the tank

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for customer satisfaction. After
while
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a while

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I saw every
think
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thing

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as it is.
Thus
, decided to write
letter
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a letter

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to you and inform your property
managing
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management

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condition.
Lastly
, requesting you to do necessary action on the same
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thing

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think
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thing

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as well as hire a vendor for
water
pool
cleaning and change
water
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the water

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twice or
trice
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twice

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a week so it will not smell. Looking for
positive
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a positive
the positive

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response from your end. Yours faithfully, Rohit
Markad
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Marked
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