It is thought that
who move to a new country should follow the
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it is better that immigrants keep
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of
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country. I agree with adopting in
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. In
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and
expose my reasons.
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host believe that
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for newcomers is finding a new job.
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from native
, more job opportunities will be introduced to them, and they can have
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with employers and customers.
, absorbing
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can decrease the cultural dispute between different ethnic groups.
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about differences
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their
, they can focus on their job and education.
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, other
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of traditional
and national language. Because
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they insist that adopting in local
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tongue.
. It is possible that new generations will
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their ancestral traditions.
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and cultures
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, there are some temples in Canada where many
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immigrants gather and perform their traditions.
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newcomers encounter
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shock and prefer to have a
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of nationality ,many of them are interested in absorbing
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native
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rapidly .I think that those who accept all
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society will be more successful than others.