Modern societies need specialists in certain fields, but not in others. Some people therefore think that governments should pay university fees for students who study subjects that are needed by society. Those who choose to study less relevant subjects should not receive government funding. Would the advantages of such an educational policy outweigh the disadvantages?

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specialists in professional fields. Some people proposed the idea that government should pay the tuition fee for

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who study in the appointed department

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needed by

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. In my opinion, I consider

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suggestion is helpful not only for

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but the

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.

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, the government responsible for the tuition as cultivating future specialists in our

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, it will possibly make our countries better and more efficient.

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, the

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who live in poverty obtained more opportunities to study for free at the university, which accomplished equality of education and resulted in less burden on their families.

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,

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suggestion may have some concerns.

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of all, some

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would probably select subjects they don't favour because of budgets.

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mentioned, to cost down a fee of

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and reduce the burden

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family, some

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would give up their favourite department, and

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to take a subject they don't like. It is very pitiful that people can't even choose what they love due to lack of money.

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, some people might take

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advantage and work abroad when they got

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degrees or certificates. It would cause a lot of burden

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and have nothing to contribute to our country, it may even grab

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chance from other

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who are urgently needed. In conclusion, I totally agree with the advice for studying free in relevant subjects because it would truly help some

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who

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available to afford the tuition in university

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it may have some disadvantages.