Modern societies need specialists in certain fields, but not in others. Some people therefore think that governments should pay university fees for students who study subjects that are needed by society. Those who choose to study less relevant subjects should not receive government funding. Would the advantages of such an educational policy outweigh the disadvantages?

In modern societies, it is so common to employ

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specialists in professional fields. Some people proposed the idea that government should pay the tuition fee for

students

who study in the appointed department

that is

needed by

society

. In my opinion, I consider

this

suggestion is helpful not only for

society

but the

students

.

Firstly

, the government responsible for the tuition as cultivating future specialists in our

society

, it will possibly make our countries better and more efficient.

Secondly

, the

students

who live in poverty obtained more opportunities to study for free at the university, which accomplished equality of education and resulted in less burden on their families.

However

,

this

suggestion may have some concerns.

First

of all, some

students

would probably select subjects they don't favour because of budgets.

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mentioned, to cost down a fee of

university

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and reduce the burden

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family, some

students

would give up their favourite department, and

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to take a subject they don't like. It is very pitiful that people can't even choose what they love due to lack of money.

In addition

, some people might take

this

advantage and work abroad when they got

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degrees or certificates. It would cause a lot of burden

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our

society

and have nothing to contribute to our country, it may even grab

this

chance from other

students

who are urgently needed. In conclusion, I totally agree with the advice for studying free in relevant subjects because it would truly help some

students

who

aren'tt

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aren't

available to afford the tuition in university

although

it may have some disadvantages.