you are not satisfied with the changing rooms in the sports center that you visit .write a letter to the manager. what the problem is how feel about the problem what steps you want the manager to take

Dear Sir or Madam, I'm writing to inform you that shower space are small and lacked locker
room
in
thechanging
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the changing

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rooms. I am a
membership
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member

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of
this
sports
center
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centre

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for a year and I recently found out that the number of lockers
are
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is

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insufficient in the changing
room
during the weekends.
Also
, the shower space
are
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is

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really
crowed
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crowded

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. I felt not satisfied with
this
situation when I have my
lesure
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leisure

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time to work out a bit after my work. I believe that I am not the only one
felt
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who felt

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disappoint
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disappointed

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about the changing
room
. I suggest that changing
room
should
be expand
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be expanded

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in the
next
few weeks or early
of
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apply

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this
week.
Furthermore
,
membership
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members

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should own their
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unique

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unqiue
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unique

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locker in the sports
center
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centre

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in order to save more time for exercise. Thank you for giving the matter your attention.
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Yours

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Your
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faithfully, Jack
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