Improvements in health, education and trade are essential for the development of poorer nations. However, the governments of richer nations should take more responsibilities for helping the poorer nations in such areas. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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been divided into two main parts: the rich and the poor. Those in
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underveloped
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the opportunity to gain exclusive excess to medical health care, learning system and geographical trading. Some
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that in order to help the poorer nations, the governments of the wealthy and developed ones should
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take
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. Whilst others
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of view before it is concluded in the conclusion.
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amount of resources to ask for help.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Developmental aid
  • Global solidarity
  • Economic disparity
  • International cooperation
  • Sustainable development
  • Fiscal responsibility
  • Governmental intervention
  • Humanitarian assistance
  • Foreign aid dependency
  • Institutional support
  • Global economy
  • Self-sufficiency
  • Neocolonialism
  • Bilateral agreements
  • Multilateral organizations
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