Children are generally more successful in foreign language studies than adults. Thus, it is better to learn languages in childhood. Do you agree or disagree?

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Learning a new language is one of the most important things to do because, in
this
manner,you will know more about the culture of a new place.
Furthermore
,
time
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has demonstrated that children are generally more successful in foreign language studies than adults.I think that it is better to learn during childhood.I have
this
opinion for two reasons which I will explain in the
next
following paragraphs with my personal examples.
Firstly
,learning a new word need so many skills in speaking and everywhere.
In other words
,when we were children we didn't have so many difficulties learning the native terminology but now we have.
For example
,if you say to me that you should learn the German word for a job there,believe me, I will go for one year and still not learn that because for somebody it is easy for another person is difficult.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • cognitive development
  • neuroplasticity
  • critical period
  • language acquisition
  • linguistic proficiency
  • phonetic articulation
  • bilingualism
  • multilingual
  • immersion
  • pedagogy
  • pronunciation
  • sociolinguistics
  • accent reduction
  • retention
  • cultural assimilation
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