Some countries have introduced a law to limit working hours for employees.Why is this law introduced?Do you think it is a positive or a negative development?
Still, now there are lots of countries,
they
do not follow any Correct pronoun usage
that
time
limitation
rules
for work
. While it’s bringing many assets, employees
also
face some problems such
as they are getting sick, and they cannot spend quality time
with their family
. In my view, Fix the agreement mistake
families
this
is a positive step and can bring benefits not only society
but physically and mentally too.
Bounding a Change preposition
to society
time
limitation
, it is significant for workers
health. Change noun form
workers'
worker's
This
is simply because without
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,without
time
limit law, they will take too much pressure Correct article usage
a time
about
their job. Change preposition
on
As a
result
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,result
employees
are suffering from different kinds of health diseases. Even they are getting mentally depressed. For instance
, in my country
there is no Add a comma
,country
time
limitation
for workers
. My uncle working in the community center
, doing Change the spelling
centre
nonstop
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a nonstop
shift
as Fix the agreement mistake
shifts
rules
of company
, Add an article
the company
he
gets physically Correct word choice
and he
week
. Because of these reasons, Correct your spelling
weak
workers
stay all the time
in stress. Day by day they are getting incited person. Without starting a time
limitation
work
, it is so harmful for
Change the preposition
to
employees
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employees'
employee's
body
and Fix the agreement mistake
bodies
mind
. That’s why all countries need to familiar Fix the agreement mistake
minds
time
bounding rule
Fix the agreement mistake
rules
with
their Change preposition
for
workers
.
In addition
to, doing work
24/7 hours, it stays far away from their family. They cannot spend enough time
with families
. Huge distance Correct pronoun usage
their families
grow
up to family and relatives. Some relatives Change the verb form
grows
also
taunting
there Wrong verb form
taunt
to
being a busy Change preposition
for
person
. Family and friends do not understand Fix the agreement mistake
people
about
our Change preposition
apply
countries
Change noun form
country's
time
bounding rules
. My father, for example
, he
is a banker. Several types of Correct pronoun usage
apply
work
pressure encumbered him. Most of the time
he came to
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apply
home
after 10 P.m. He cannot attend any family function. Even we cannot see him every day because of his late. Because of Add an article
the home
this
type of gap workers
gradually
far away from their social life and own corner. Add a missing verb
are gradually
Limitation
of work
is very helpful to gets
spear Change the verb
get
time
for socializing and strong our family bonding
In conclusion, although
exorbitant work
is also
useful for getting a
rich, I strongly feel that we need Correct article usage
apply
to
Change preposition
apply
time
rules
for work
. If every country introduced to
low Change preposition
apply
time
limit rules
with their employees
, they will develop health and sincere
about their families.Add a missing verb
be sincere
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