You are in a hospital with a broken leg.Your colleagues have sent you get well soon greeting cards and gifts.Write a letter to them and include : Thank them for everything Explain how you spend time in the hospital Inform them about your recovery process

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Dear All, I really wish that all of you are in good spirits. I received your letter yesterday post my x-ray examination and I am still delighted to

this

day at the get-well-soon greeting card you sent along with some of my favourite sweets and chocolates. For starters, I am recovering quite well and my doctor, Ms Anna, suggested that I may be relieved within a few days since my reports came out to be positive. Speaking of which, I mostly spend my time in the ward assigned to me where I have a personal television to watch some of the cartoons I enjoy. What's more, just yesterday, my mother brought me a pile of comic books to savour and kill time as it gets really boring here. To talk about food, I think I just don't like what the hospital cooks for its patience normally. Mostly, my dad gets me something to eat from either the cafeteria or nearby restaurants. Anyway, as I mentioned earlier in

this

letter, I am to be discharged by the mid of

week if everything goes as planned. I will keep all of you posted surely. I hope you see you soon. Warm regards, Utsav Chandel

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You are in a hospital with a broken leg.Your colleagues have sent you get well soon greeting cards and gifts.Write a letter to them and include : Thank them for everything Explain how you spend time in the hospital Inform them about your recovery process

Today, the high sales of popular consumers goods reflect the power of advertising and not real need of society in which they are sold. What extent do you agree or disagree ?

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