The diagrams below show the existing ground floor plan of a house and a proposed plan for some building work. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
These diagrams depict the existing ground floor plan of a house and a proposed plan for some building work. It is clear from the graphs that several changes and new things are suggested to well be built in the proposed changes and change the general shape inside the house.
According to
what is shown, kitchen
furniture is the bigger change was
added to the proposed change for the house. Correct pronoun usage
that was
In addition
, the Hall is removed.
While
the location of the stairs and the internal door was changed as well only one of the internal door
is still there.
Fix the agreement mistake
doors
To sum
up
we could say that the living room became bigger as the Add a comma
,up
kitchen
turned smaller after removing one of the internal wall
, Change to a plural noun
walls
kitchen
furniture was added, the
shape of the stairs was changed which led to reducing the space between the living room and the Correct word choice
and the
kitchen
and as a result
to that the Hall was disappeared.Submitted by rayaallafe on
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 85%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words kitchen with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 7 times.
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