The diagrams below show the existing ground floor plan of a house and a proposed plan for some building work. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagrams below show the existing ground floor plan of a house and a proposed plan for some building work.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
These diagrams depict the existing ground floor plan of a house and a proposed plan for some building work. It is clear from the graphs that several changes and new things are suggested to well be built in the proposed changes and change the general shape inside the house.
According to
what is shown,
kitchen
furniture is the bigger change
was
Correct pronoun usage
that was
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added to the proposed change for the house.
In addition
, the Hall is removed.
While
the location of the stairs and the internal door was changed as well only one of the internal
door
Fix the agreement mistake
doors
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is still there.
To sum
up
Add a comma
,up
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we could say that the living room became bigger as the
kitchen
turned smaller after removing one of the internal
wall
Change to a plural noun
walls
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,
kitchen
furniture was added,
the
Correct word choice
and the
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shape of the stairs was changed which led to reducing the space between the living room and the
kitchen
and
as a result
to that the Hall was disappeared.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 85%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words kitchen with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 7 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • ground floor plan
  • existing layout
  • proposed plan
  • building work
  • key features
  • expansion
  • alterations
  • space utilization
  • functionality
  • aesthetic appeal
  • natural light
  • inhabitants
  • quality of life
  • enhanced flow
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