Nowadays, more and more people decide to have children later in their life. What are the reasons? What are the negative impacts on society and family life?

Some
people
argue that the government is waiting for resources in certain aspects
such
as
arts
,
paintings
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and paintings

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and they should spend the funds
for
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public services like
education
, transport and healthcare. From my point of view,
although
arts
such
as painting and music
is
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are

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vital to relax
in
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on

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daily
basic
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basis

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, the governments should spend the expense
of for
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on

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public service There is no denying that some entertainment programs
such
as art,
paintings
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and paintings

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are important activities that help
people
relax in their leisure time.
Firstly
, these activities help
people
reduce stress and their
mind
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minds

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after busy working hours.
As a result
,
people
feel more energetic by participating in these activities.
For example
,
a
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research from Harvard University found that doing two things at the same time like listening to music and studying helps
people
improve their mood, motivates learners and improves memory.
In addition
,
arts
are considered a major source of income
to
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for

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a nation.
For instance
, in the USA, there are a large number of
arts
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art

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museums over the country where millions of visitors come each year to experience different cultures that
make
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making

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the economy earn a huge amount of money.
However
, investing more money in some public services
such
as
education
,
transport
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and transport

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have
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has

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several advantages not only for individuals but
also
for society.
To begin
with,
education
plays an important role in the development of the country.
This
means that if a nation invests in the development of
education
, the economy will grow faster than
other
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in other

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countries which bring more opportunity for jobs and better quality of life to
people
.
Therefore
, in order for society to become more modernized, every nation needs a large number of engineers, doctors, experts and so on.
Therefore
that is
the reason why the government should invest more in
education
.
Besides
, public transport should be invested to make and meet the demand of humans.
As a result
,
people
can save on travel expenses, limit the impact of outside weather and enjoy a good time when
traveling
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travelling

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by bus.
Furthermore
, the community will reduce traffic
jam
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jams

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,
environmental
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and environmental

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pollution from private cars.
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,
this
is
reason
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the reason
a reason

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why the government should invest in public service to
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people’s

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people’
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people's

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life become more
modernization
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and convenient. In conclusion, it is clear that spending money
for
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on

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some public services is beneficial both for an individual and
the
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society.
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