The plans below show the site of an airport now and how it will look after redevelopment next year. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graphs show
that
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apply

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the shops and facilities
in
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on

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and airport map and how to rebuild and allocate the site
next
year. In regard to the difference of the plans, there will be a
sjy
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sky
shy
joy

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train
to
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instead
of
walkway
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a walkway

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after the passport
controal
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control

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customs to enter the on gate area as the amount of it will be increased from 8 to 18 gates.
Beside
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, There are car hire is coming up
next
to the arrivals sectors for visitors who can
eailer
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easily
easier

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and quicker to leave the
air port
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airport

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.
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, the arrivals and departures area
are
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the same between now and after so people will not get
confuse
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confused

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if they come to visit again.
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,
the
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passport control customs and security passport control are
setting
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set

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on
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in

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the same places as well. Overall, after development will be
more
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apply

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larger and more shops to
fulfill
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fulfil

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traveller need and
giving
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give

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more convenience to them.
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