Life is all about stages, there comes a period one needs to relax, and taking
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or their children but
depends on how early procreation took place in the aspect of children taking
of them. Meanwhile , a few numbers of individuals are of the notion that 60years elder should retire and as well stop working . I totally agree with
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the need for older
to cherish their
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The cycle of life comes with stages and as well one needs to
every opportunity seen at every spot. When it comes to
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50 and 60
for some
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who are
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to rest in other not to keep stressing themselves with much
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for job employment for the youthful
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all through. NO... Other minor jobs can be created for them like
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of mini shops where they can come out each day and exercise and interact with others thereby eradicating some
issues like diabetes, osteoporosis which affects the bones , and depression .
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places them on pension allowances and
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of resilience,
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service.
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because most ligaments
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been worn out gradually and there is
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in strength. In the US
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provided a province known as OLD
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for those who do not have capable funds or persons to take
of their needs.
, they are encouraged to practice passive exercise to avoid
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which could affect their
status and
strengthen their life span. Again , vacation can be another avenue to enjoy your
with friends, loved
and family at large.
In conclusion, 60years of hard work, stress and psychological trauma that
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be taken for granted . And as well
should be ready to retire so that younger
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and have their monthly or daily earns.
stage is a necessity.