15. You’re interested in a music course that you saw on an advertisement. Write a letter to the club. In your letter, you should: - explain why you’re interested - request more information about the course - talk about your past experiences.

Dear Maam/Sir, I happen to see your advertisement on the internet yesterday regarding on

music

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class that your organization will have

this

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summer. I was delighted when I saw it, and I'm writing to inform you that I'm interested to join. I was a big fan of

music

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when I was a kid.

Although

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my singing is not good, I can play

instruments

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really well. I can play

guitar

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the guitar

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, and piano and I'm starting to learn how to play the drum

this

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time

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. My parents bought those

instruments

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a long

time

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ago, and I try to play them out of boredom.

However

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, as

time

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goes by, I keep wanting to know how can I play

this

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song, and little did I know, that

music

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and playing

instruments

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became my passion. For that

music

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curriculum, are there any requirements to prepare and forms to sign up? I

also

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want to know the

time

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and exact date when it will start so I can be ready ahead of

time

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. Do let me know

also

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how much it will cost, so I may inform my parents about it. I may still be lacking in some ways, but I try to improve it by participating in school events and class activities when in terms of playing

instruments

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. I

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volunteer myself in the church choir, so I can improve my skills, and

also

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, provide entertainment and joy to other people with my talent. I'll be waiting for your positive response. Yours truly, Angel

angelica

Aug 6, 2022

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The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

Best regards,
Warm wishes,

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
3
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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

249 words

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