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The charts below show temperature and rainfall in Equatorial climate and Mediterranean climate. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

The charts below show temperature and rainfall in Equatorial climate and Mediterranean climate. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant
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The chart provides information about the climatic conditions in
Equatorial
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the Equatorial
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 and Mediterranean regions. It illustrates
about
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apply
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the
temperature
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 and
also
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about
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apply
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the amount of
rainfall
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 in those regions.
Overall
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, the
rainfall
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 and the
temperature
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 in the respective regions were represented in cu mm and degree
celcius
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celsius
 for a period of one
year
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.
Firstly
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, on one
hand
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,hand
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 the
rainfall
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 in the Equatorial
climate
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 had a rise in the
intial
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initial
 month of the
year
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 later in the
mid
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mid-months
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months
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 it fluctuated between 150-200 cu mm.
At the end
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 of the
year
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 in the
months
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 of November and
December
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,December
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rainfall
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 had
it’s
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its
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 peak.
On the other hand
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 in the Mediterranean
climate
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 the
rainfall
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 had
it’s
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its
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 peak in the
intial
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initial
months
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 and
at the end
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 of the
year
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,
however
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 in the mid
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months
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,months
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 there was a drastic decrease in the
rainfall
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.
Secondly
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, the
temperature
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 in the Equatorial
climate
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 remained steady throughout the
year
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 which was about
25 degree
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25-degree
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celcius
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celsius
,
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however
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,however
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 the
temperature
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 in the Mediterranean
climate
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 increased drastically in the
intial
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initial
months
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 and had
it’s
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its
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peak
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a peak
the peak
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 in the month of August lather there was a rapid fall in the
temperature
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 which
equaled
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equalled
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 to the
intial
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initial
months
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.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "at the end, however".
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Contractions: Don't use contractions.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words temperature, rainfall, year, climate, months with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 4 times.
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