Many governments invest a great deal of money in space research. What are the advantages and potential disadvantages of spending money on space exploration?

There is no iota of doubt
earth
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atmosphere is good as it used to be, cause of
research
and globalization human beings are destroying the
earth
very badly. The majority of governments around the world are spending a huge amount of funds to explore space . There are considerable merits and demerits to
this
phenomenon,
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we are going to discuss both. When we understand in-depth primary there are two important benefits I can think about. the main one is when govt do
research
they need
lot
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of employees,
therefore
, it helps to reduce the unemployment rate.
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, in India recently government hire 70000 people for a
research
team. Another benefit is the possibility of living on another planet makes us hope that in future if
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does not continue well for living beings
then
we can shift to another planet;
for instance
, when the covid hit everyone wanted to leave the
earth
and move to the mars.
On the other hand
, Spending
money
on analysis in other places is wasting taxpayer
money
which is earned by hard work.
instead
of the community should spend that
money
to improve the health of
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, it will be more beneficial rather
then
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spending capital on
research
.
For example
, due to a covid
lot
of countries were locked down and people were working from home.
As a result
lot
of that
earth
was healing very rapidly. In India, government spend
lot
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of
money
on cleaning of holy river Ganga but the Ganga was automatically cleaned in lockdown. In conclusion, While a large number of countries are allocating budgets to explore outer space , there are several benefits and drawbacks to
this
to discuss. I personally feel like the advantages like creating opportunities as an industry for many young scientists,and a vision to search for a redundant planet for living outweigh the disadvantages
such
as
money
wastage and not focusing on the other essential services.
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