Some people say History is one of the most important school subjects. Other people think that, in today’s world, subjects like Science and Technology are more important than History. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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whether the
History
subject is more vital than
Science
and
Technology
or not in modern
society
. In my opinion, the
History
is same important as
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Science
and
Technology
since they belong to
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subject
class
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, humanity
science
and
nature
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science
.
To begin
with, it seems to me that there are three main reasons
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why some people believe that
History
is more important than the other two.
Firstly
, the primary reason is that
history
can provide many
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to us.
For example
, people in China can find the historic counterparts of almost every modern
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.
Secondly
, those experience is really meaningful for our modern
society
and our future according to my knowledge.
Finally
, I am sure that those whose major is
History
are more likely be a leader in their jobs.
However
,
although
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History
is important for us and will benefit us, we still cannot put it
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a position
that is
higher than that of
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Science
and
Technology
. As
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history
is very important in
humanity
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science
and
technology
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also
very important in
nature
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science
field.
Furthermore
,
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humanity and
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nature are the two main factors in modern
society
. Each factor is indispensable for us.
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,
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History
can make us knowledgeable while
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Science
and
Technology
can promote the development of our
society
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to compare them. In conclusion, I insist that
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History
and
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Science
and
Technology
are both significant in
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, so we cannot compare them.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Cultural heritage
  • Historical perspective
  • Analytical skills
  • Contextual understanding
  • Technological advancements
  • STEM (Science, Technology, Engineering, Mathematics)
  • Innovation
  • Interdisciplinary
  • Job market
  • Climate crisis
  • Cultural identity
  • Critical thinking
  • Humanities
  • Contemporary issues
  • Integration
  • Tech-savvy
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