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Nowadays eating habits of people around the world are changing causing them many health problems including obesity. Why do people tend to eat so badly? What can be done to improve their eating habits?

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Globally, the way individuals commune has taken a different dimension leading to a lot of health issues
in addition
 to
overweight
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. The primary cause of
this
 phenomenon is
the
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busy life activities and the most viable solution is to make
time
 and prepare healthy
home
 meals.
Firstly
, busy life activities
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 one of the enormous cause
people
 are not presently communing well.
That is
 to say, the economy has become so difficult that
peoples
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 attention has been shifted to what will put monies into their pockets neglecting their health.
As a result
, they tend to consume anything they lay their hands on.
Also
,
availability
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 of junk
foods
 everywhere is leading
people
 to eat poorly.
Foods
 like
noddles
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 and chips are easily on the street and so
instead
 of spending
time
 and resources to cook, individuals prefer to just walk in and satisfy their hunger without considering the nutritional content.
For example
, in a recent survey conducted, it was recorded that about 70% of
working class
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people
 take in junk
foods
. When asked why they concluded that it saves
time
. A
long term
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 solution to
this
 predicament is that
,
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people
 should make
time
 out of their busy schedules and cook
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homemade
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home made
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 cuisine for themselves. A key factor to
this
 is that
,
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 meals prepared at
home
 contain the nutrients needed for growth in their right proportions and not bicarbonate soda that
are
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 predominant in these junk
foods
. In conclusion, our eating habits
has
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 been altered because of our
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work
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wok
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 life as well as
availability
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the availability
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 of
foods
 sold outside and
people
 should be made to make
time
 out of their tight schedules to prepare meals at
home
.
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