An organization has given an advertisement for a part-time job for local children. Write a letter to the administrator of the organization. In your letter Introduce yourself Why you think you are suitable for the job State when you will be able to join that job

Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing
this
letter because of the story that was published in
Daily
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the Daily
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Bugal newspaper
last
Friday about the part-time employment offer for young local children. I hope that position is still available. My name is Sky, I am 16 years old and I completed my primary school
from
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at
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Delhi Public School with
good
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a good
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grade
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. I am
independent
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an independent
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person and I like to do things on my own, I even organized many competitions during my time at school, I even
partipated
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participated
in some of the cooking events and won several prizes and my aim is to become one of the greatest chef's like Salt Bae. The main reason why I am
more
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a more
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worty
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worthy
worry
candidate for
this
job is it includes cooking, and I have some good experience with
this
and most importantly I love
this
profession.
This
will help me personally as I can add
this
to my resume for my
further
studies as well. Coming to my joining date I will be available from
next
Wednesday as I have to wind up
few
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a few
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things related to my studies. I hope you consider me for
this
position. I look forward to
hear
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from you. Yours
sincearly
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sincerely
, Sky
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The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

  • Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

  • Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

  • Best regards,
  • Warm wishes,

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